This was pretty good, but two things:
Firstly, you should probably invest in some sound effects, it gives everything just an extra touch
And secondly, the girl who voiced Rika, I could barely hear her and she didn't have alot of emotion, or really any at all. Other than that, I was happy to voice in this. Even as a minor character.
If I make another one- your character would be Tasuke which has a larger part
overall i think everything kinda fell apart as I lost motivation toward the end
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